rate a rap i made earlier?
its a horrorcore rap but its not my usual style i was just trying somthing new and im only rapping 2 months so be brutally honest please….
ill cut you like coke and leave you 3 percent pure mix you with anthrax itl poison you with out a cure/
im sick yes i am ill drink your blood and have a good time/
so lock me up and throw away the key and watch me spread shit on the wall indecently/
when i was young i usta cut cats and dogs throats now i kill humans and throw them over boats/
insanity and anarcy thats me i make people uncomfortable and panicky instantly like light/
id do anything to start a pointless fight right left right right ko,d and then dance on day head till it explodes/
normally im evil or sad a manic depressant or schizophrenic/
i got two people insida but its fine that just means i constantly got my best friend beside me/
but they clash and make one another paronoid and it sky rockets my temper to farenheit/
i get to a point i cant breath so i need to get my mind offa things/
so i kill kill kill and take out another contract to fufill my greed cos im a piece of white thrash fucking inbreed/
guns aint my style id rather burn peepz to a scorther and keep adding fuel till it gets hawter/
my whole life ive been a hater ive impacted earth worse than a crater/
ive tied people up and didnt come back till two months later/
the feeling of inflicting people with pain gives me an evil sick gain its like shooting up on heroine/
ive been trying to get to the gates of oblivion my desired nation and chill with the most feared creature in creation my man satan/
i summon demons from hell like a necromancer so take my words as serious as cancer/
i live my life with the phases of the moon when its full its time for my muthafucking reign of doom/
i rest i then awaken 28 days later and the insanity continues from midnight to noon/
in my past life i think i was attila the hun gotta stay of the polices rader cos im a close combat asasoun..
killing is the passion wearing peoples skin is the fashion but i dont waste the meat put good use threw cannabilism/
survival is the game of life and death so i dont care f you dont like what i spat/
if you didnt im gona fuck you into a fishermans net and throw you in to the middle of the ocean and laugh and smile cos i dont got got emotion/
so what ye think…hahaha am i sic ker than eminem
no good rhyme scheme
your just whack
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You are sick as in whack as hell.
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no good rhyme scheme
your just whack
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i agree
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I’m going to have to agree with the rest, the Lyrics aren’t that great, If you want to get into the whole Horrorcore rap then you’re going to have to learn a few things.
Learning about the human Anatomy would help a lot, you will know where everything is located which could help out.
Listen to some true horrorcore rap,
Check out the SKR camp if you haven’t already. SickTanicK and Stitchmouth both are great Horrorcore Rappers.
Also 80′s and early 90′s Gangsta Rap is good to Check out along with Death Metal Lyrics. Ganksta N-I-P was an extremely good Horrorcore/Gangsta Rapper from way back His 1992 Album The South Park Psycho was extremely sick and off the hook 
Don’t let these haters stop you from doing your thing, If your into it, work on it and do what you do, life is too short to have others stop you from living life which you only get to live once.
Just don’t go practicing your music in RL, Like none of that Go kill your girlfriend cuz the music made me do it bullshit.
Horrorcore Rap is no Different From other Genre’s of Music, it’s for Entertainment Purposes only.
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Horrorcore/Underground/Political Rap fan since the 80s
u is wrong in the head
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September 2nd, 2010 at 6:52 am
sick is right- what are you on!!
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